peer review for PLT #2
One point that I gave was that Alex needs to explain more about the growth and fixed mindsets in his next paragraphs. Other then that his essay flows nicely and is very well put together. One good point that Alex gave me was that I need separate my essay up into different points in order for it to make more sense and to help the flow, he also said to explain a little more and my ideas.
One good point I had for Hannah was to tie the coaching experiences she’s had in her life back into her essay there wasn’t really a lot about how coaching has helped her. One good point that Hannah gave me was that my essay needed more explanations and to not get off track as much and try to focus on one idea.